Twenty

30th Sep 2022, 5:04 PM
Twenty
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killersteak 30th Sep 2022, 5:04 PM
killersteak
Page 20 is here! In a format I surely won't regret when I decide to put together a book! (dies)

Tap-chan wanted the same drink as Webby-chan and I think she's regretting it after smelling how strong it is.

Comments:

Archer Xanthorg 30th Sep 2022, 5:08 PM
Archer Xanthorg
Actually, I think phone screens will probably stay about the same size they are today.
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:20 AM
killersteak
resolution in them is going up higher at cheaper cost than laptops or monitors though.
ShaRose49 30th Sep 2022, 5:24 PM
ShaRose49
Webby-Chan would be proud of your new format X”D
lirvilas 30th Sep 2022, 6:43 PM
lirvilas
Needs more blank space with intermittent cryptic dialogue lol

but yes yes yes even I must admit killahstake blows it up with truth bombs
Jaycee Storm 30th Sep 2022, 11:21 PM
Jaycee Storm
Couldn't agree more. Webby-chan approves of the long scroll!
Awesomeness Studios 1st Oct 2022, 12:03 AM
Awesomeness Studios
Lol I noticed something was interesting about the new format
killersteak 1st Oct 2022, 12:48 AM
killersteak
i wasnt 100% set on the script so this gave me room to not have to worry about fitting words in. expect it to flip around between this and more traditional grids depending on what is happening.
YellowSaffronCitrine 30th Sep 2022, 10:19 PM
YellowSaffronCitrine
o m geebus! Alcohol consumption in MY family friendly webcomic?! >:V


(jokes aside, I like how each character's drink reveals something about them)
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:25 AM
killersteak
well you wont like when mitch shows up smoking.
jmluvsbob 1st Oct 2022, 8:51 AM
jmluvsbob
That's so weird, I swear I left a comment on this one! Either way, love the pose and energy on the first panel. And I love the banter between all the girls. Sprite comics! I never made any of those, except for the first time ever when I did some for the New Realm of Scrutiny thread. Those pages were quite fun, but not something I could keep up with. Sprite comics are a whole different type of work, and it depends how much effort you want to put into it. Like, you could just use the regular game sprites or you could spice them up by editing the sprites as well. Fun, fun!
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:28 AM
killersteak
i tried making a sprite comic once and being that i didnt grow up with 8bit stuff, or any megaman or FF, in my house i kinda didnt really get it. i got like one page done to prove to myself it was possible and moved on.
maice 1st Oct 2022, 10:21 AM
maice
what caused the new format! I wish I had a bunch of girlfriends to come and talk comics all night
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:29 AM
killersteak
i just wanted the art to not be so cramped for a change. now im noticing things and wondering if it was a bad idea...
cactusaurus 1st Oct 2022, 1:24 PM
cactusaurus
Tap-Chan voicing an original thought—I'm proud of you, Tap-Chan! Love the fancy hand-lettering you sprinkle throughout the comic, especially this Liquor Serving Hour one! I'm a sucker for purple, sparkly stuff :D
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:30 AM
killersteak
i wanted to look up anime subs and get some ideas from how they do/go overboard/ with special moves etc, but in the end i just made something up.
eekee 1st Oct 2022, 2:20 PM
eekee
I confess I laughed out loud at that one line from Jeevie Smackie NO! Whatsherface with the purple hair.

This format works surprisingly well for me. It's surprising because I'm on a 23" 16:9 which normally makes wall-to-wall imagery kind-of painful, but the panels on this page fit comfortably within the screen. It's actually worked out better than some more traditionally laid-out comics.
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:36 AM
killersteak
they should be the same height panels as the previous page, and the page width is the same, cos i just modified that template to get this.
Matt Comics 2nd Oct 2022, 11:17 AM
Matt Comics
I agree, the custom hand-drawn words are cool.

Tap-chan has my favorite design out of the non-CF girls! I think it's the headband.
killersteak 7th Oct 2022, 11:38 AM
killersteak
im happy each girl so far is at least somebodies favourite.